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Michelle Review: Naughty Games Series by Lena Matthews

Multicultural Contemporary: White male, Filipino female

Sensuality Level: Steamy

I recently went on a brief vacation, and picked up the first book of this series, Seven Minutes of Heaven. After a few pages I knew I’d want to read the whole series. For one thing, I’m an absolute sucker for the “friends-to-lovers” trope, and for another, all of the characters are so interesting that I really wanted to read their stories.

Essentially, it’s like an erotic version of the TV show, “Friends,” but with much more engaging, and less annoying characters.  Seven friends, four guys, and three girls, met in college. Of course, there was all types of attraction going on, but everyone was too afraid to act on it. The group stayed together even after school, attending parties and vacationing as well. At varying times prior to the beginning of the stories there have been hook-ups amongst the couples based on naughty games, all of which have ended disastrously. Though they’ve remained friends, several of the couples have been pointedly avoiding each other.

Each book starts at the same point; Shane, who is the self-appointed leader of the group, and the only one who knows the details of the disastrous hook-ups, has gotten them all together again for his birthday. He gives them all some very pointed gifts as a way to bring about a reconciliation.

Surprisingly, Seven Minutes of Heaven, was, for me, the weakest of the three stories. At a previous party Bev and Holden had wound up in the closet playing the game, Seven Minutes of Heaven. While in the closet, they have a very sexy, very well-written make out session, when it’s over Holden tells Bev that he manipulated the game so that he could draw her name. Somehow Bev gets it into her head that he’s done this out of pity, and storms out, refusing to speak to Holden for two years. I wanted to slap Bev more than once, she’s definitely the “Monica” of the group, and I always wanted to slap that character as well, but Holden was so engaging that I stuck with it, and I did like the resolution of their story, though I think Bev owed Holden an apology, her response was simply over-the-top.

Contemporary MMF

Sensuality Level: Torrid

The second story of the three was far more emotionally engaging than the first, and it’s definitely the grittiest of the three. For years everyone in the group has been waiting for the group’s princess, Skylar to choose between Gideon and Tripp. Problem is, she wants both. After a drunken game of I Never, she gets her wish, not only that but Gideon and Tripp engage in some hip speeding of their own. Tripp freaks out in a really ugly case of “gay panic” and they haven’t spoken since. Tripp’s reaction is understandable. He’s a professional hockey player and if anyone ever discovers he’s gay, or bi, or whatever, his career could be trashed. This story is very realistic, and the three of them have to work really hard for their HEA.

Surprisingly, Skylar, who is definitely the “Rachel” of the group, comes off as very likable and very self-aware. Gideon was a very strong character and I felt a great deal of empathy for the way he was drawn. He’s hurt, and he’s angry and with good reason. The only weakness in the story is that there is a gay player on the team, and he doesn’t seem to have experienced any repercussions, so that weakens Tripp’s justifications and that aspect of the whole story is resolved a bit too neatly for me.

Multicultural Contemporary: Black female, white male

Sensuality level: Steamy

And finally we get to Shane’s story, and his love for Paige. Shane has used outright bribery to get Paige to attend his party. A few years ago, Shane had a bad automobile accident. Paige, a nurse, was very supportive while he went through a long recovery. During a weekend at his family’s cabin, they wound up having sex after a game of Double Dare. Afterwards, Shane, who had very good reasons was reluctant to engage in a relationship with Paige. Paige was understandably angry, and left without waiting to hear his explanation. She hasn’t spoken to him since, until this party.

All three stories were fun and engaging. To my mind there were only two flaws; Why were the guys the only fuck ups here? I mean, I think at least one of the communication problems was more the girl’s fault than the guy’s, but he was the one groveling.

Also, because each book begins at Shane’s party we get that same scene over and over again, though told from a slightly different viewpoint. By the time I got to the third book I was ready to smack the author, but I didn’t dare skip those pages for fear of missing some detail. All three books were very entertaining, and I enjoyed the set-up.

Seven Minutes of Heaven can be purchased here.

I Never can be purchased here.

Double Dare can be purchased here.

Michelle Reviews: Stranded and One-Two Punch

 

Stranded by Eve Vaughn

Heat Level: Blistering

MFM black female, white male, Latino male

Note: As I’m reviewing multicultural books, I think it would be remiss of me not to list the character’s ethnicity. Sometimes covers can be deceptive, and though that’s becoming less of an issue, I still think it would be a disservice to leave that out. So I’ll be doing that going forward.

Until I sat down to write this review I’d forgotten how much I enjoyed this book. Eve Vaughn is a writer I’d read before, so when I decided to try a triad, I picked up one of hers. Vaughn in some ways reminds me of Linda Howard; when she’s on nobody’s better, but when she’s off, God help you. Fortunately with this book she was awesomely on.

The story is fairly basic, India, the heroine, decides to take off on vacation after breaking up with her fiancé. Rafe and Grant are best friends who are vacationing together to recover from Rafe’s bad marriage and subsequent divorce. During said marriage they discovered that they enjoy sharing a woman, and are actively looking to form a triad. They meet en route and are immediately attracted to one another.

As the title would suggest, they’re stranded on a desert island as the only survivors of a horrific plane crash. And this island is no paradise, for one thing they suffer from a lack of food, and as none of them are survivalists, the situation quickly becomes acute. The scenes on the island are where Vaughn really shines. I liked the way she showed the relationship between the three developing. They’re walking wounded, battered by difficult lives. Rafe and Grant both come from broken, abusive homes. India is from a home that should’ve been broken. Because of this, it’s easy to understand why they would choose an unconventional relationship.

Of course, they’re eventually rescued and returned to civilization. And this is when the real conflict of the story occurs. For one thing, they’re a media sensation, and India, in particular, begins to doubt the legitimacy of their relationship.

India, the heroine, is probably the weakest note of this story. Though within the context of her home life and the battering her self-esteem had to have taken in that atmosphere her choices make sense, I still found myself screaming at her at times. Other than that, this is a very deftly told story. Stranded is available here.

One-Two Punch by Katie Allen

One-Two Punch by Katie Allen

Heat Level: Blistering

MMF white female, white male, biracial (black/Japanese) male

Katie Allen is a new to me author, though she has quite an extensive backlist. After I read Stranded, which is a MFM story, with absolutely no sexual contact between the two men, I wanted to try a MMF story. Much to my surprise I discovered that I like the sex scenes in the MMF story better. Male-to-female anal sex squicks me out, and DP just sounds painful. However, male-to-male anal sex doesn’t bother me at all. Yes, I know that’s crazy, but hey, I never said my reviews would make sense. In the MMF stories the men have more than one avenue to sexual pleasure and frankly anything that leads to less DP is full of win for me.

My overall sense of this book is that it’s just cute. The story has some humorous scenes, and an overall sense of fun that I really enjoyed. That’s not to say that there aren’t any dark issues; Ky, one of the heroes just left the military with a case of PTSD. There is also an issue with a stalker and that’s never a good thing.

At the beginning of the story Beth sees Harry through the window of the gym he owns and thinks he’s uber-hot, so she feigns an interest in learning to box, and he becomes her trainer. The two of them become lovers very quickly. In a bit of foreshadowing Beth asks Harry if he’s ever been with a man, and he tells her about being attracted to one in the Army, but never acting on it. (This whole scene just rang false with me, I can’t imagine ever asking a man whether he’s been with a man. And Harry’s low-key response just doesn’t sound like any hetero male I’ve ever met.)

I like Beth, and I like Harry, but until Ky shows up this is a rather generic romance: Sassy blonde meets rugged ex-GI ho-hum. Ky and Harry served in the combat together and there was sexual tension between the two, but given the close quarters it never came to anything. Now, back in the States with a Mental Health discharge Ky comes looking for Harry after having an ugly dust-up with his father over his sexuality. Beth is instantly attracted to Ky, who is apparently so beautiful he can literally stop traffic. (I pictured Ky looking somewhat like Tyson Beckford who I think has the same heritage as this character, so I could understand her reaction.) Beth is already living with Harry and Ky moves in.

I like the way the story slows down at this point and the relationship evolves. If all three had just jumped in bed together this probably would’ve been a wallbanger. And frankly, given the speed at which Beth and Harry got together that’s what I expected. Instead, we see three characters with fairly realistic responses: Beth is thinking she’s a bit of a slut for lusting after two men. Harry is questioning just what his sexuality is. Ky already knows he’s just wild about Harry (sorry!) but is somewhat surprised by his attraction to Beth. I do have to point out that this is definitely a “gay for you” story. When Beth quite reasonably questions Ky’s attraction to her despite his sexual orientation he tells her, “If wanting to fuck you means I’m not gay, then I’m not gay.” Actually I guess that’s a case of “straight for you.” Or is it? Hell if I know. Just thought I’d point that out.

There is a bit of paternalism as well, though it’s not racial. Harry is nearly a decade older than both Ky and Beth and feels somewhat protective of them. This is incorporated into a couple of sex scenes and it’s very effective.

And for the record, the scene where Ky explains their relationship to his father, the cop, is worth the price of the book. Maybe it’s because I have a black father of my own, but I laughed out loud at that scene. One-Two Punch is available here.